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#WritersCoffeeClub 2. International Children’s Book Day! What makes for a good book for children?

What they want to read. Seriously. Try to guide them away from false non-fiction and toxic fiction. But

All Underpants Gnomes all the time? Comic books? Manga? Classics? Recent fiction and nonfiction? Nothing but Gaming manuals? It's all good.

It's like kids who only want to eat 3 things: force them and you end up with eating disorders.

Force reading choices and you get kids who hate books.

#WritersCoffeeClub #WCC 2504.01 — April Fools Day! Do you include in-jokes, hidden messages, or “Easter eggs” in your writing?

Yes. If I can convince you to read Mars Needed Women (eldritch.cafe/@sfwrtr/11426181), there is a HUGE amount of subtext in the story. It's about hidden (or intentionally dusted with a tiny little bit camouflaging rust) messages. Much is also said indirectly. It's a study in saying a lot without saying much that would get you in trouble. The "EM" in the story is the in-joke, because, well, you know who that refers to. What happens to the silvery phallic symbols and the money is, well, maybe somewhat subversive? There's even a few Easter Eggs in the form of popular references. It was fun to write.

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The cover art for Mars Needed Women. The background is of the Mars surface with rover tracks, big rocks, sand, and a greenish sky. There is a triskelion image of Mars, which is a tattoo in the story. Credit NASA and ESA for the photos. The back cover reads as follows:

Shanghaied

May Ri struggled when the EM goon clamped an aromatic wet rag over her nose and mouth...

Waking weightless and nauseated—stuffy head pounding, being floated somewhere—despite grogginess, she eyes-closed punched someone, spinning away to bounce off a wall. The click of cartilage, the thump off a bulkhead, the blare of a warning horn, and "Rig for ring spin!" rang in her ears. A tech clapped a bag over her mouth before she vomited up her last meal, while enduring the blonde's glare as blood beaded around her nose. May Ri glowered back. Sitting on the wall, dragged on her butt, her inner ear then her innards soon informed her the wall was becoming the floor.

From the author: 
“A hopeful deeply-dystopian feminist SF story, with thinly veiled jabs at our current world's bad actors making for a bad future. Please note the past tense in the title: Mars Needed Women.  The story's women are going to work to bring down the system, at least that part that's oppressing them, in a massive unscheduled 
disassembly.”
Eldritch CaféRS, Author, Novelist, Prosaist (@sfwrtr@eldritch.cafe)Attached: 2 images My feminist SF web-novel *Mars Needed Women* is complete! 23,300 words in 31 chapters, one chapter posted each day throughout March, the last posted 23 minutes ago as I write this. Check out the cover art. To read, either use the hashtag #RSMarsNeededWomen or this link to the first chapter: https://eldritch.cafe/@sfwrtr/114088945266387178 The full novel is in the thread. Just scroll to read. > “A hopeful deeply-dystopian feminist SF story, with thinly veiled jabs at our current world's bad actors making for a bad future. Please note the past tense in the title: Mars Needed Women. The story's women are going to work to bring down the system, at least that part that's oppressing them, in a massive unscheduled disassembly.” I'll leave it up for you to read for at least a week. After that, I'm revising it for later secondary publication. [Author retains copyright (c)2025 R.S.] #BoostingIsSharing #Writever #Mars #SpaceOpera #writer #author #sf #sciencefiction #scifi #feminism #gender fiction #writingCommunity #writersOfMastodon

#WritersCoffeeClub #WCC 2503.31 — Happy International Transgender Day of Visibility! What trans author has inspired you the most?

Oh, noes! It seems I don't care who the author is just that their story is great. I don't read intolerant crap. I do have a trans friend who inspires me, but that is because you would never know. They are invisible, have no problem with that because they are now completely consistent in mind and body, and are happy. Horses for courses, I guess.

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the persistent AoGG fandom is fascinating to me, because it is so opposed to every piece of modern publishing advice. (Anne still gets fanfics!) the sentences are long, the vocabulary is mature, and almost nothing happens in the book aside from humdrum small town life. Anne should be no match for dragons, werewolves, and talking animals. and yet she remains memorable, while so many others sink into forgettable sameness. quality must matter but character, even more so.

#WritersCoffeeClub #WCC 2503.30 — Do you label your works as LGBTQIA+? Why or why not?

This seems almost like a fan fiction question. In commercial writing, you end up writing genres which by definition either are or aren't. As I understand this, booksellers like Amazon force these genres. That's not labeling (or tagging), that marketing. I can't see tagging a book that is one genre as LGBTQIA+ if some of the characters are whatever or simply tolerant.

As for one fan fiction example, I did not use the gay tag, but did use romance and sex tags. In the long description, I did mention it was written for a M/M contest. As far as I'm concerned, if it ain't explicit it's friendship, love, and passion—and anybody can relate to that. I think I got a few down votes for that, but fuck them.

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#WritersCoffeeClub 2. What makes for a good book for children?

publishers and marketers have lots of opinions on this. but i think children don't necessarily need simple vocabulary and sentence structure to enjoy a book - look at Watership Down or Anne of Green Gables, for instance. there has to be something compelling in the book that motivates kids to keep reading, in spite of possible challenges. lovable characters are probably even more important than adventure (as AoGG shows).

#WritersCoffeeClub Apr 1: Include in-jokes, hidden messages...?

Oh, absolutely. To the point where I've probably forgotten some of them.

And Alice, of course, speaks in pop culture references. So I imagine the nuance of half of her dialogue goes over the head of readers who don't know scifi shows the way I do.

#WritersCoffeeClub #WCC 2503.29 — How do you handle foreshadowing? How do you navigate building up to the ‘big reveal’?

Good question, as this is a major technique for giving continuity to a story.

Since I start my stories with a character and her agenda, and a firm idea of what will happen to end the story, I have only the vaguest idea of plot when I write. This means I often discover with my characters how they will react to an event, and why they can do this or that thing. I discover backstory as I go. Which means...

  • I backfill. That means I go back to previous chapters and add clues to support what will happen in the later chapter.

  • I emphasize a discovered bit of backstory or attribute in expectation I might use it in a future chapter. For example, in Mars Needed Women, I realized Earth would attack the Martian capitol but it wouldn't happen in that chapter. That made me realize Earth would take out a really important character doing so. I emphasized "capitol" and in the next chapter assigned a place to that "capitol" mentioning that's where the character worked. In the fatal chapter, where was the bad thing going to happen?

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#WritersCoffeeClub #WCC 2503.27 — What’s the strangest situation or place where you’ve written?

I've written on the deck of a ship. Also the empty galley way past midnight. I write regularly in the car (as a passenger) all the time, so that's not particularly strange anymore. With noise canceling airPods, the spouse can listen to podcasts while I listen to electronica.

One time I wrote on the moon, but that was a dream…

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#WritersCoffeeClub 1st April. Do you include in-jokes, hidden messages, or “Easter eggs” in your writing?

Sometimes I do because I love doing this. But it's important that nothing hinges on anyone getting the reference. I put footnotes if I reference a myth that is important to understand a dialogue or something but if it's just for my own amusement it's just there, no matter if anyone but me gets it 😅